My first song, looking for feedback
Hello everyone! I´ve recently published my first song (beat, mix and master) and i´d love to hear your feedback about both the beat and the mixing and mastering.

nightime contigo by Kaya.



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Adam s
Nov 15
nice track :) great vibe. kick and bass is fighting eachother a bit for sure. you can hear on the 3rd note of the bassline they really clash, maybe more sidechain. if you're using a compressor to sidechain try using a volume shaper like lfotool or shaperbox as its much more accurate than a compressor. it's weird because it sounds like its sidechained but on that 3rd note it clashes hard so im unsure what the problem is exactly. love the vocals!
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Hi Kamal :) it's not really my style. I think the vocals are very beautiful, but they're a little detached from the music. I feel like the vocals are too in your face and everything else is too far back. It could be your artistic choice, so in that case, no problem. Otherwise, I'd broaden the background music slightly (because it sounds a little too centered) and try to integrate the vocals a little more into the mix! (Not too much, so as to maintain this style anyway.) Anyway, great track, good idea!!!
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kamal eddin (author)
Nov 18, 17:02
Thx a lot to both of you, i´ll work on them things
Congrats to @Magghy Ji for having the top track in the chart this week with 'I Want It All'!
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Magghy Ji
Nov 18, 09:49
Thank you guys!! I'm really excited about it 😇
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Felix Lepoutre
Nov 18, 14:52
Wow cool!!!
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Ron Toll
Nov 18, 16:42
Congrats Magghy
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SoundGym
Nov 18, 05:09 in SoundGym Official
Congrats @Wes Truelove for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Colin Aiken
Nov 18, 06:32
Fantastic!
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Lio LM
Nov 18, 07:27
Congrats Wes! ⭐⭐⭐
Congrats @Michael Miller for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Colin Aiken
Nov 18, 06:36
Fantastic!
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Lio LM
Nov 18, 07:26
Congrats Michael! ⭐⭐⭐
Congrats @Lauryn Lu for winning the Diamond Ears Award!
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Colin Aiken
Nov 18, 06:37
Incredible work!
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Lio LM
Nov 18, 07:26
Congratulations Lauryn! 🌈🌈🌈
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SoundGym
Nov 18, 00:09 in SoundGym Official
Congrats @Joel Anderson for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Lio LM
Nov 18, 01:16
Congrats Joel! ⭐⭐⭐
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Colin Aiken
Nov 18, 06:34
Excellent job!
Congrats @andrew timothy for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Steve Rinaldi
Nov 17, 18:21
Way to go, Andrew! Congrats for winning your golden ears!
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Lio LM
Nov 18, 01:16
Congrats Andrew! ⭐⭐⭐
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Colin Aiken
Nov 18, 06:34
Superb work!
Congrats @Morgan Watson for winning the Golden Ears Award!
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Steve Rinaldi
Nov 14
Morgan, congrats for winning your Golden Ears - on to Diamond!
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Billy Lorne
Nov 15
Hell yeah, Morgan!! Congrats on those Golden Ears!!
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Colin Aiken
Nov 17
Fantastic!
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SoundGym
Nov 16 in BeatRace
@Bruno BAFZ is BeatRace legend. Congrats for winning!
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Congrats🎉
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Colin Aiken
Nov 17
Very cool!
https://soundcloud.com/giovanni-pandolfi-324820699/sets/canzoni-personali-su-noi

hi!
I'm a 16 year old from bergamo, Italy, i started playing guitar in my bedroom(self-taught) a couple of years ago, the started writing songs and last year in december I bought a focusrite and a mic and started producing my own songs, i do it every day because it makes me feel less alone and I have met lots of people with my same interest , I first started playing guitar because i saw Nirvana's mtv unplugged and that inspired me a lot, then I was inspired by jeff buckley, elliot smith and started singing and taught myself how to sing, now I listen to a lot of rap(MacMiller, Eminem ecc) and trap.

I am called gio__pando on instagram and one month and a half ago i started to post consistently because I decided it's time to show myself to people, my name on soundcloud is gio and friday I will be releasing on Soundcloud(and eventually on Youtube) my first mixtape in italian of 9 songs.
I would be glad if you listened to even just one of them(i recommend -trucco=+bella= or carenza di sodio) and told me what you think I should fix or pay more attention to.
thanks!
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Giovannni Pandolfi (author)
Nov 16
thank you so much for your feedback!
the next time I will lower a bit the guitar and when I have some free time I will go search how to make the lead vocal sit in the pocket.
thanks!
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Ciao Giovanni :) ti scrivo in italiano così faccio prima. Concordo pienamente con i consigli di John Ackerberg. Continua a sperimentare e a lavorare tutti i giorni... sei talmente giovane che se ti impegni un giorno raccoglierai ottimi risultati. Unico consiglio, attenzione sempre con gli effetti; è molto facile farsi prendere la mano. Cerca sempre di tenere la voce in primo piano: in questa traccia basterebbe forse abbassare il delay e riverbero che prende troppo spazio sui Side. Buona musica a presto :)

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