Hello everyone! I created a song, from empty project to last LUFS on Limiter by myself.) I would appreciate your thoughts about it. Production, mixing, mastering, voice perfomance or even if my song s@cks cause you in a bad mood..)) Among other things, I would like to ask my English-speaking colleagues how much my accent is audible. Many thanx to everyone who is going to share his or her thoughts! Best wishes.
In the first (Close to me), the “me” doesn't really intonate. You start the note too low and then try to pull it up a little. I would re-record the whole first phrase. At 1:20 “Who can fly” you have automated the treble with an EQ. I would try editing just the playback. Otherwise the “can” sounds kind of muffled. 1:35 “we can fly” the automated reverb sounds like a bathroom to me :-) I like the next part with reverb better. I think the spectral ballance is great.
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