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Jason Stanley
Jan 01
i just made my first ever submission to the charts. If anyone would be willing to check it out and tell me what they think, I would be hugely grateful! Any kind of tips would be amazing, there are people here from many backgrounds. The song is called Stay Away by Beneath Atlantis. (Album art below). Thank you so much everyone, and HAPPY NEW YEAR! πŸ˜€πŸ’“πŸ’―πŸŽ΅πŸŽΆπŸ•›
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Jason Stanley
Jan 01
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Al Brown
Jan 01
is there a link to the song?
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matt levitt
Jan 01
I have a couple notes for you. 1) the low end is a bit boomy/resonant, the bass is pretty far forward and conflicting with the body of the kick. 2) give the bass more presence by upping the attack in the tone. 3) bring the guitars down a little to help the vocals stand out in front. 4) the vocals feel a little lifeless, try giving them more energy.
feel free to dm me for any elaboration
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David David
Jan 01
i gave my coin, nice work
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Luan Ngo
Jan 01
Very Nice!!! For me I just wanted to hear Vocal stays up front is a little bit more... with more Grit as well, may be. This is an awesome track by the way. Well done and Happy New Year :)
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Jason Stanley
Jan 01
@Al Brown it is in the charts section of soundgym
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Jason Stanley
Jan 01
Thank you guys for the feedback it helps me a lot! I am excited to add some metal to the mix, few people here seem to make metal haha. I can't wait to make newer things and to keep improving, thank you so much for feedback it means a lot to me πŸ˜ŽπŸ’œ
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Al Brown
Jan 02
ohhh ok. I want familiar with that thanks
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Al Brown
Jan 02
Hey man I don't listen to Metal but that song rocks and so does the mix. From a taste perspective, pulling the isolated
guitars in a bit in the beginning? I'm listening on headphones so it's completely possible that i'd like the hard left and right panning on a stereo system. I feel that the instrumentation sits a bit in front of the vocals. I'm not sure if this is characteristic of Metal but just an observation. Thanks for sharing.
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Jason Stanley
Jan 02
Thank you so much everybody! πŸ’šπŸ˜Ž